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eva was a lonely girl,
a derivative.
the sweet white curve of a rib
wandering

a lonely girl.

eva was
engulfed in a great white wave of ennui,
the urge to do something.
eva planted a garden
lonely girl.

eva's trees grew tall and strong,
shelter and source of life,
disallowed forever.

a friend in a tree,
limber and waiting
limbs like silk and words like serum
[an anaesthetic honey on
candied apples.]

a friend,
forbidden.

eva was a lonely girl.
eva was a lonely girl.
even a serpent would have been welcome.

fragmentary.
unrelated to anything irl, for once. and literal, too. :>


feeling biblical, probably because of what i'm writing for my non-fiction essay right now. i'm not religious at all. what is this

maybe i should just stop talking to people for a while.
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lissabug416 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
So gorgeous, I love everything written and implied.
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consolecadet Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
thank you!
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little-supernova Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's awfully gorgeous. Love the rib part, simply because it makes so much sense. :heart:
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alapip Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Rachael...
you tell this story so much better
than the lines [fictions] in an old book.

with empathy
for human frailty,
non-judgmental,
you understand.

be damned!
this is perfect!

:heart:
pip
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:iconconsolecadet:
consolecadet Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
thank you so much! i'm glad you like it :>
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alapip Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
on this one especially, Rachael, it is my pleasure.

;)pip
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
Aw, I like Eva and these images of hers. :heart:
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consolecadet Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
thank you! <3
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