literature

something small

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Literature Text

i just want to suck a tiny
painchunk
out of every one of you lost souls traveling through lost bodies

all i want is a hammerclaw,
syntax error
something i can use
to grow your hope
trying to say that same thing
again

i need to write more
this is poor
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Lottie-Girl's avatar
I quite liked this actually.
You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, you're a talented writer.
If you want to write more, think five minutes a day, it's a lot better than a concentrated few hours on a weekend. :D
Even if you think it's inadequate, better to write crap than not at all.