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there's this fly circling my bedroom,
this massive green-chromed thing like the world's smallest space-ship.

i've been counting and every four minutes thirty seconds it dive-bombs my head,
strafing airplanes and helicopter drug-raid spots through boarded-up cracks
& it's all in my head,
headlights and streetlights and not drug-
raids at all.

i'm a demon,
he said,
a speed demon.
i'm not, i said, and
i don't think we're going to get along.

i'm more of a mosquito than
a housefly or a blowfly,
that forensic larval life cycle
[determine time of death,
police setting sequences of events]

i'm a mosquito,
needle fingers &
red-streaked arms.

there's this fly circling my room & he's a speed demon
edit: oh my gosh, thank you so much! i swear you're all conspiring to inflate my ego like a hot air balloon

TITLE, Y U NO MAKE SENSE?
:icony-u-noplz:
also, poem. why you so terrible?

i think this is the same narrator as from habituated.

inspired by the huge fly that really is in my bedroom right now and by this expletiviously vulgar rap song [link] .
i also just watched 2001: A Space Odyssey, which might have something to do with it as well.

even when i'm feeling pretty good, i still write depressing things. even when i'm temporarily, madly happy. i don't understand.

it doesn't need a mature filter, does it? it's not explicitly explicit. . .

this was almost prose and then i changed my mind
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tsundoku's avatar
I really enjoyed the imagination in this. The word use... the ideas you get across... Lovely. Simply lovely. I might edit a bit for grammar and use of space but... I really enjoyed this a ton :)