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iris,
go-fer of the sky,
you open like a flower
cup me like the wind
leapt and leapt and arched across the air
carry all this moisture and yet you never cry
go-fer of the sky,
you open like a flower
cup me like the wind
leapt and leapt and arched across the air
carry all this moisture and yet you never cry
well, that was short
and not very well-thought-out or even good
and not very well-thought-out or even good
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You might think it's clumsy, but it's not that bad. It's not disjointed. It's more... bouncy. Not so bad. Norton won't be calling anytime soon (for any of us), but it's still better than most things here.