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we broke ourselves on the edge of dawn,
bottles and bottles and a small smoking pile of cigarette ash
you said sleep is for the weak

you said a lot of things are for the weak.

and yeah
the girl in the boy's underwear told you were being selfish
and she told you to get a grip

and yeah
maybe it was a bit mean,
but i think she had a point
:iconconsolecadet:
i just really like the phrase 'and yeah'

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~tiajones Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is wonderful [:
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~Lottie-Girl Jun 3, 2012  Student General Artist
This made me laugh, good work.
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~WordsOfThunder Jun 2, 2012  Student Writer
It works very nicely. Who would have thought a simple phrase could say so much?
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~NicolaiGrey May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
good work :) i liked it
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*alapip May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
but yeah
you is missing, Rachael -
needs to be "told you you were..."

;)
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