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your face is hazier now
but I carry you in me still

as long as someone remembers
you are not yet dead
 
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LeahShae Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  New member
there's something about the tone of those first two lines that i just adore. :heart:
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consolecadet Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
thank you!
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indigo-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i appreciate the shakespearian "i'll preserve you with my writing" nature of this.
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consolecadet Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
thank you! I was reading a book of quotes about writing my dad gave me last Christmas, and thinking about just that sort of 'writing prolongs life in some senses' thing
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  New member Student Photographer
I think of someone I love who i have not seen in a long long time. I still see his face & hear his voice but its hazy now...its dim.
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  New member Student Photographer
I understand this completely...its very nice.
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consolecadet Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Thank you! Whom or what did it make you think of?
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  New member Student Photographer
Oops, sorry. I answere in the wrong place :-/
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