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stubble pricking through my face
neo-noir movie
I don my trench coat
step out into the fog

to take pictures of suburban lights

what is it like for you
to date a photographer
I am a parody of masculinity
I am masculine but not male
I exist to subvert myself
your brown eyes
black in shade
tree sap to trap bugs in light

your soft hair, soft cheeks, soft back
soft all

your hand on my shoulder a home
your voice to me a home
not a place
holy shit I'm so gay I can't believe it

loosely based on these pictures I took of my beau:…
comparing Santana to Otis Rush
I rediscover truffles in the fridge

plan for tomorrow
while leaning back across the foam roller
that vertebral shift
always the finals week poem
always write these
stress fosters procrastinato-writing
Mature Content Filter is On
(Contains: sexual themes and violence/gore)
She slept at a truck stop, smoked some cigarettes the medic took out of the back pocket of his pants.
He turned to the nurse to hear her songs of sorrow: an old woman's eagerness, a middle-class place, a lynching, a feminist organization.
"SHAME CULTURE"--rolled her bloodshot eyes--"a single thread of rape and humiliation binds it all together."
Leto's heart delights: Achilles spared her life.
She carries the bow forward throughout her golden age.
A faint and precise sob: "What can God mean?"
"That's all," said the Mexican policeman.
ENG-0001-30 poem, II
found phrases from "2666", "Norton Anthology of World Literature", and "Columbia History of the World"
I tell you something I haven't told anyone in a long time
you say "I'm sry hun"
nothing bad results

I seek mirrors and hope I am reminding myself I am there,
not seeking to hurt

dear god, I don't believe in you
please make my mouth a door and not a cage
gibbous man
I am still growing up
I am trying to be more open
I think it's working

this isn't very well-written, but neither am I right now


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United States
Sometimes, when I'm not writing prose, drawing pictures, or living, I write poetry.

Hi all,
Long time no journal (again).

A lot is going on. I'm in the midst of gender transition, which is going great, and I'm headed off to Tufts in about a week and a half.

One of the biggest things that's going on is that I'm working on a near-future science fiction short story collection. It's called 'Biophone' and I plan to put it out via Amazon CreateSpace some time in the next couple of weeks. All the writing is done, but I'm in the thick of revisions.

I’m looking for volunteers to critique bits of the collection. The bits are all between about 700 and 1500 words, and shouldn’t take more than an hour to read through and leave comments on. You don’t need to be a writer or a poet. The more eyes of varying knowledge and background I can get on this thing, the better it’ll turn out.

Your time is valuable. I’d be super grateful if you could contribute a few minutes of it to my project. 

Let me know if you’re interested by emailing me at consolecadet @ gmail . com. If you’re not interested, please consider telling your friends.

I'm more than willing to trade crit for crit.

Now: how are you all doing?

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sairey Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave!
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thesquareroot Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the fave :fish:
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AnotherPassenger Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you <3
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Tevo77777 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Artist
Enjoy turning whatever age you are now, it only happens once a year.
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
happy birthday :cake:
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